William Kirwill the American from "Gorky Park" says it all

William Kirwill the American from "Gorky Park" says it all
"Born-again Christians. They don't smoke, they don't swear, they don't fuck" That's me minus the Christian part


Monday, January 17, 2011

Samurai Warriors


Playing checkers in the park with the old guys, has never been as competitive as playing Mahjong in a field of lilies with the Samurai!

 

I did it!  I did it!! 137 characters!!! 

 Susan over at "Stony River"  hosts Microfiction Monday. The idea is to use Susan's picture she posts then compose a story up to and including characters, punctuation marks, etc adding up to 140.

Misfires and Brain Farts by at
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15 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2011 at 11:32 AM

    Great story! Very well done!

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  2. FireblossomJanuary 17, 2011 at 1:20 PM

    Oh god. Mah Jong. It's to the death, baby. On the street where I grew up, there were Mah Jong blood feuds, I swear lol. My mother called it "Chinese Tiles." She doesn't get it.

    "condemnations" instead of "comments. Ha!

    I apologize for being so long in returning your visits. But this UFO landed in my neighbor's driveway and out stepped fave Sarah Palin clones, and...well okay I made all that up.

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  3. klahanieJanuary 17, 2011 at 1:35 PM

    Aha, very well done, indeed! And another three exclamation marks !!! and you would have reached 140 characters :-)
    Have a peaceful week.
    Kind wishes, Gary

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  4. NessaJanuary 17, 2011 at 1:50 PM

    Oh, yeah. That sure is a cut-throat and competitive game.

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  5. SoniaJanuary 17, 2011 at 2:53 PM

    Good story!

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  6. Gorilla BananasJanuary 17, 2011 at 6:36 PM

    Never having done either, Martyrmom, I'll take your word for it.

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  7. Missed PeriodsJanuary 17, 2011 at 7:46 PM

    I'd say it depends on which old guys.

    Well done.

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  8. neena maiya (guyana gyal)January 18, 2011 at 6:35 AM

    That sounds deadly! I like the contrasts...field of lilies and cut-throat competition.

    I play mahjong on my pooter. Sound effects and all.

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  9. Doctor FTSEJanuary 18, 2011 at 7:40 AM

    Nice one!

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  10. CadJanuary 18, 2011 at 7:54 AM

    Too true...

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  11. Grandma's GoulashJanuary 18, 2011 at 11:33 AM

    Talk about competitive spirit! Good one.

    My MF: Details

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  12. Lisa Ricard ClaroJanuary 18, 2011 at 1:18 PM

    That's something my 87-year-old father-in-law would say! LOL Great MF.

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  13. TrellissimoJanuary 18, 2011 at 1:25 PM

    The variety of ideas found in the prompt this week is amazing. Here's another fresh one! Well written!

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  14. MsbJanuary 19, 2011 at 8:42 AM

    This made me smile. Great job!

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  15. JinksyJanuary 19, 2011 at 3:07 PM

    This one's for the gardening enthusiasts! LOL

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